All Comments on 'Elaine's Night Out'

So, just a cheating slut, then? What's to like about this bitch? Oh right, nothing at all.

Poorly written... no attempt at quoted speech... mechanical.

A bit like someone transcribing a CCTV tape.

1 star.

A very basic and rather unrewarding effort, sorry.

So another "loving wife" gets zapped by a lesbian slut ray. And no thought about her husband just the young stud she is now dreaming about. Oh and her lesbian slut friend.

I guess some women are hooked on guys, the best women are the ones hooked on women.

There are short stories , & there are very short stories .

Guess this is a very very very short one.