All Comments on 'Eleanor'

Loved it I can’t wait for another chapter

I think your story definitely has potential but it would probably benefit from an editor/ proof reader. It took me a while to work out what it was going on as regards the time period and setting. I decided on it being an alternate version of earth and possibly a period piece? There was confusing elements; mobile phone, absence of electricity Albany, being sent to a nunnery isn’t standard practice for an abandoned child. I wasn’t sure if Albany (NYC USA) was meant to be Albion (former name for UK ) or St. Albans (UK town) Either way I glossed over that and read on. Looking forward to reading more.

Tess (UK)

Not a bad story, but not what I was looking for under nonconsent. That element was still there, but I think it would be a better fit under erotic horror with the style of writing.