All Comments on 'Eleanor Pt. 03'

And I thought the sex between Aidra and Eleanor was intense. You have a way of creating provocatively erotic images that linger while revealing so much of your characters. Yes, much of Soria’s narrative is sex — not a complaint. Probably said more than once, I believe that the storyline and characters are captured/revealed in the sex; the sex becomes the story in well crafted erotic fiction and your fiction is well crafted. Eleanor may be the central figure, but you’ve surrounded her with uniquely intriguing characters.

I’m in awe of the consistently high standards you manage to maintain, Alice. Such a joy to read. Your wit is positively Stendhalian!

What could be a humdrum lesbo encounter is elevated by your excellent writing sytle and the psychological depth you lend your characters. Each character in this series so far really stands out, even if they get up to similar tricks!!

What a brilliant flashback sequence! I usually hate them, so you must be doing something right. :)

What an elegant and passionate encounter with the lovely Aidra, so young and willing to please without shame. A rare jewel indeed. I could see several more stories around how she adapts to her conjugal status. There are hints that she has "taken" others of her peers and made them smile. Just sayin'