All Comments on 'Elisabeth Ch. 02'

You really are a great writer! loved this story now on to the next one!

A traditional interracial cuckold story.

Black men with huge cocks, white boi eating their cum.

What an whore, she'll end up in the gutter when they are bored of her. No decent bloke would put up with her. It's not even well written.

I can make no suggestions on this story.

It simply could not get any more boring. There is literally no way to make this story work except by deleting everything but the last line "The End".

Obviously written by someone who has never had sex.

It was rough.sex, the writing reflected the whole story. White trash gets cast into the gutter after being badly abused by black trash. But sadly for some, life's like that