All Comments on 'Elise Ch. 01'

I like the beginning even if nothing had happened up to now. Somehow Rachel seems to be the more interesting person than her dad. I

Looking forward to the next chapter.

lot of expectations build up.

Im sort of hoping she convinces her dad he’s really a sub and to go find a mistress, but it seems other things are about to happen.

Literally put me to sleep, sorry.