All Comments on 'Elise's Abduction'

You’re an idiot who should be embarrassed about this story.

A few nights later he left the club and made his way to the car, he never heard the swish of the baseball bat but he did see stars as it caught him squarely behind the ear causing him to fall to the ground like the proverbial bag of shit that he was.

Several stomp's later his balls would never produce another sperm and he would use a bag to piss for the rest of his life, his cock ever getting hard again a distant memory.

He felt the breath against his ear from the voice of his assalaint that he had yet to see

"Now do you understand what No means"

Amazing! I would looove to read more please! ^^ Don't listen to the negative comments, I loved your story and crave for more. I subscribed :)

Dark, sinister, fucked up and non erotic. This says it al really…

“This was her fault, for not agreeing to become my submissive. Now I was going to force her to like it.”

I read this far and skipped to the end on the off chance that it was a CNC scene but sadly not.

Thanks but it’s not for me, best of luck with your writing.

Tess (uk)