by Captain_Ron
So glad to see you're still writing. I know it can be hard but wow, you do it so well.
OMG YOU ARE BACK!!!! Haha sorry but I am VERY excited about that. Haven't even read the story yet.
Great story, it's nice that Kevin gets to enjoy some fun times too. I love your stories about Elise and hope you continue them!
Hell yeah! Miss your stories man! I really hope you keep doing more of her! Naive Elise is on par with "Just One of the Guys". Good to see you back!!!
That was amazing and way too short haha! I don't want to be greedy, but I really hope you have more of Elise coming soon. Your stories are by far my favorite.
My predictions was right, elise would be sucking everyone dick. God I wish I was there.
Thanks so much for coming back. Though Elise after reporting all the incidents is much less erotic than him almost catching them or being near and not understanding. Also would love it if it was even more descriptive of the incidents or more cum leftovers being removed in front of the naive boyfriend.
Feels like you just got here? You’ve been there for 2 years, 2 months and 3 weeks! It’s about time you came back! Welcome back again! Hope to read more of your stories
Glad to see a new addition to the Elise series. Love the miscommunication aspect. Thanks!
So when did she have anal sex with the guys? All i remember was Emily's BF at the gym showers. Was this something that happened "off screen"?
Love how stupid Kevin is. This story is not so erotic as earlier Elise stories were however, a pity
Make sure you get all the vaccine shots and the boosters, so you can keep writing this brilliant stuff for a long, long time!
As you probably remember, I'm a big fan of the miscommunication plot device that you have been utilizing for all of these characters. I just wish that You would come back and finish these last couple of stories so that we all had a bit of a conclusion to them. If you need help, feel free to hit me up! I know I've had quite a few ideas over the years..
Kevin was exceptionally clueless at the end of this one but it was good to see him have fun with Sarah this time around. I was really bummed that there were no details of the night he spent with Elise and Emily earlier.
The difference between being naive and being stupid. She's naive, he's stupid.