All Comments on 'Ellie Forever Ch. 04'

Well, I'm up to date with the chapters. First, the chapters are too short. I know your trying to put them out quickly. I still think this series can go on for awhile. They have so much to discover and explore. I like the characters and the interaction between them. I'm looking forward to the love Addie will share also. It is your story, but I can see you taking him and the two girls to many places and sharing many experiences. I think they will have a threesome at some time, but the way you are writing this, I know they will end up more close. I also think you will have to have some kind of conflict to show all the emotions they have so the reader can get invested with the characters. I look forward to the next chapter and thanks for your time and imagination.