All Comments on 'Ellie Submits Pt. 14'

What an amazing journey that Ellie has been on. This has been really well done and I'm enjoying it so much. Thanks for writing it.

It just seems strange that Ellie knows this isn't the relationship she wants with Miriam but continues to submit. I think she is in love but realizes that Miriam can't show that because she only lives for control. The entrance of Simone just proves the point that Miriam wouldn't be satisfied with just one person. Not to say Ellie is not having a certain amount of fun but its not her prime interest. I hope she gets what she wants in the end.

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Cheers

More great work. Loving how Miriam is taking Ellie ever deeper into the D/s world, and the introduction of Simone has been fantastic too. This was one of the best chapters yet, especially the ending. As ever, I eagerly await the continuation. Great work. 5 stars.

The twists and turns of Ellie's torment are exceptional. It ssems the more torment the mor aelliecis getting hooked on submission.