All Comments on 'Elliot: Courted Pt. 01'

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StraycatndcStraycatndcover 1 year ago

Great beginning! But 5 martini's for a non drinker and at his weight would put him in the hospital! A seasoned drinker would probably end up hugging the porcelain goddess, lol

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Nice start! You've got me really interested to see where this goes from here. Looking forward to part 2. MLF

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Awesome! Keep going!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Damn I loved this story. Can't wait for the next chapter

lordpenizworthlordpenizworthabout 1 year ago

The pacing and overall believability of this story is what makes it sexy. It's on its way to becoming a credible older-younger seduction piece. Very sexy so far.

Hoping for continued restraint from the author as the romance and lust unfolds.

"Ellie" is a great name.

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