All Comments on 'Eloise, the Technician Ch. 02'

A realistic reaction at the end. Is Eloise having some doubts?

Love this!

It should be too light for my liking, but your writing really bring the characters alive.

Really enjoyed it.

Thanks for posting this.

Awesome to see your return to Lit and this was another great story. Although it is indeed a little on the lighter side. Hopefully we'll see a punishment at the centre again in another story :)

Well, ....it's been a LONG wait for the fans of your stories. I was beginning to worry that you'd been run over by a truck, or at a minimum had lost your muse. Was therefore delighted to see your work pop up today. Not much to say in my comments that I haven't said before. Your build-up to the actual administration of the punishments is as important, or even more so than the application. Much more nuanced than the common bdsm practice of jumping as quickly to the whipping/spanking whatever

It was interesting to see our technician get mildly annoyed, and even perplexed with her subject. Wondering what would happen with a more uncooperative subject, and how Eloise would respond. Sterner treatment, or a referral to a Punishment Centre ?

In closing ......,We have no right to demand stories from you. Keep in mind though, that they are very much eagerly awaited and I personally hope that you continue and with greater frequency. You are amazingly talented

brilliant as usual....many thanks

Glad your still writing erotica! Brilliant story as usual.

Happy to have you back. Is there any more we can look forward too?

Im really enjoying this story. The nipple-twisting seems a bit harshe and unusual, but its fantasy, so its all good. I particularly like the characterisation of both the protagonist and victim(?) (not entirely sure that's the right term but lets go with it) insofar they feel quite real. Nobody is being a sadistic ass for the sake of it and nobody is having wild orgasms and drooling over the prospect of being hurt. So it comes across as businesslike, and realistic, if you know what i mean. I look forward to the next chapter.