All Comments on 'Embarrassment Exploration Pt. 01'

"Hi, my name is Garth and you are is Kaitlin. " Your opening sentence shows either illiteracy, or disrespect for your reader, as it is gibberish as written. And of course, the awful choice of POV it implies makes the rest not worth the time, either.

Humiliation is a fetish, put it there.

Very typical in that the woman pushes the man further than he pushed her. Making him go into the balcony then threatening to post a humiliating video online without his consent.

Twisting it so she can do it again, no doubt worse the next day.

And she’s a friend?? I don’t get friends or lovers who like to humiliate their friends or lovers for the sock thrills. Much like school bullies who’ve never grown up.

A lot of women are really twisted, never let your guard down around them. And this isn’t romance, humiliations a fetish - belongs there. Secret nd fetish story in romance carafirty today