by Maxwell-
It's tragic that this was never continued. If perchance you should see this comment, Maxwell, please consider doing so! I would be more than happy to be your editor, should you need one. :)
...and I disagree that there was too much build up, but then I would :) It gives the fucking a much-needed third dimension. I do wish there was more.
More please! I loved it. Your writing style is great. And the story is very enthralling.
I enjoyed it too. Though i do agree that you might have spent a bit too long describing stuff in the beginning.
Brilliant sex scene though.
Please write chapter 2.
Can't wait to see where you go from here. Maybe less on the literary and more on the erotica?
Great nonetheless.