All Comments on 'Emily 2.0 Ch. 04'

Not just erotic, but thought provoking too. Good writing.

Thank you so much. I'm really glad you liked it. Comments like that make my day. :)

So many of the well written exhibitionist stories seem to want to just hint at things and never really include them, it's like they want to give everyone blue balls, lol.

Great to see you really delivering on the more perverse aspects of your setting... I hope you drag it out for a long time with all sorts of explicit kinky public sex, vry enjoyable.

Please no deus ex machina either, if Emily gets out of this, make it years later, even if time skips here and there for whatever reasons with summaries of her worst treatment, maybe even a few pregnancies.

I hope this story dives deep into her acceptance of her new life, maybe before too long Collingwood gives her progress reports while fucking her face or cumming inside her pussy.

Hopefully at the end she struggles to want to go home, and ends up stayiing.

Great story, tons of possibilities, look forward to more!

Thanks Carnalval! Great to see you back and enjoying it. :)

There's no place like home,there's no place like home. Click those pumps together 3 times my dear.

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just a wonderfull story, very well written.