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Click here"Well, that was fucking amazing! What say we all hit the bathroom and freshen up? Last one in the shower is a pussy!"
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- COMMENTS
123zover 4 years agoAuthorYes, I had to submit this and the accompanying 'gangbang' story three times because of Potter references. Had to remove even the slightest himt and rewrote three times on both. I was surrounded by scraps of paper trying to substitute names! So, he said in a whisper, it was Katie Leung and Natalia 'tonks' Tena in the original draft.
Anonymousover 4 years agoKaya and Lily both deserve more stories so I’m really pleased on that front, but there are a few weird bits left over from previous drafts - other women’s names pop up in random places (Evanna, Natalia - oh god was there a draft of this with Natalia Dyer in it?), there’s no explanation of who this Asian Katie is, and there are more typos than usual.
I’d love to see stories featuring Kaya, Lily, or Natalia Dyer getting some dick.
Anonymousover 4 years agoOmg what would I not give to get all seven to service my cock when they come out of the shower. Fucking and sucking and fingering cunt all at the same time, total fucked up bliss wallowing in cunt and pissed up on cunt juice. I absolutely adore cunt the more I get the more I want. Cunt crazed sex maniac, Lanc’s UK
123zover 4 years agoAuthorI like your idea of a birthdday shoot. I have to tread carefully as the moderators scrutinise any slight reference to Harry Potter. My first story 'undisclosed gangbang' was actually 1000 words longer as a Potter reunion but was rejected outright. So I rewrote it with anonymous escorts. The original was really hot. Likewise this one was with all the Potter girls but again I had to do a rewrite with other celebrities. Most frustrating! Especially as I have already had stories published here with Evanna and even with Emma fucking Rupert and Daniel!!
