All Comments on 'Enchanting Misunderstanding'

This was a pretty big mess. And since they're not married, why are you in the loving wives category? And I'll repeat myself. Get an editor. This was ugly.

This must be a day for slightly strange stories. I think these two were cheating, but I stopped reading after "love bone". Some one can tell me how it ends.

Is German.

English is his second language, so the grammar may be a bit odd.

But his English is one hell of a lot better than my German.

It was English but it didn’t makes any sense.

that my English isn't as good as I want it to be. And I can also understand that for some it's not exactly a pleasure to struggle through my grammar. I already have the same problem with some authors of my own language. I haven't yet found anyone to translate my stories in the style I write. So please have some indulgence and I promise improvement.

Best regards

Arne

What does this mean?

"Just say, today is already again cake sale from some such club with us up here."

if my English doesn't live up to your expectations, which I can understand. I have not yet found an editor or translator who can translate my own style well into English. I know these problems with authors of my own language and reading it is not always fun.

I try and promise improvement, but have some patience with me.

Best regards

Arne

it means that every Saturday a club (music, dance, traditional costume club) bakes different cakes and cookies and sells them in front of our café.

Best regrets

Arne

I am not going to criticize the attempt at writing in english - good effort. But story wise is this about a predator that forces himself on an unsuspecting woman and is fortunate that she does not yell rape but instead uses this encounter as a "revenge Fuck" against a cheating husband?

It may seem a little strange, but it happened by mutual agreement and it even continued. Both have come to their satisfaction, and not just this once.

Best regards

Arne