All Comments on 'Encore'

Storyline was ok, but why use present tense, which is clumsy and makes your story uncomfortable to read.

Realize that I missed this short, intensely erotic piece when I came across “Counting On Well Laid Plans”. Like very much the dreamlike scene you create — suspect many of us have enjoyed a similar experience. And the sex — you can feel it right up to “… you explode driving into her faster and faster, deeper and deeper and … .” For me, that is perfect ending to this piece; what follows while curiously interesting is bit anticlimactic. Still 5 🌟s — hope you continue to share your erotically vivid imagination.

Am trying again to post a positive response — first attempt did not take (?). In any case, realize that I missed this short, intensely erotic piece when I came across “Counting On Well Laid Plans”. Like very much the dreamlike scene you create — suspect many of us have enjoyed a similar experience. And the sex — you can feel it right up to “… you explode driving into her faster and faster, deeper and deeper and … .” For me, that is perfect ending to this piece; what follows while curiously interesting is bit anticlimactic. Still 5 🌟s — hope you continue to share your erotically vivid imagination.