All Comments on 'End of the Beginning Ch. 02-03'

more more more!!! she needs cbt and more pain. perhaps he can castrate her.

please continue the journey of Matthew and jamie, they are so erotic. jamie is such a lucky girl

CelticFae did a great job writing this story, and I'm glad I entrusted her to write the story of my character's future. I'm also glad to see people enjoyed this story so much, however I'd like to let you all know that this is the end of Jamie's story. There is no more to tell and no more to do, she simply lives happily ever after much like anyone else would. Check out CelticFae's other stories for more stories with a BDSM theme (among others) and enjoy!

Yours Truly,

Ian

I really liked the end of the story. Only I hate to see any creature treated like she was. Punishment for a shortitme is fine, but not constant beatings. Yes, I am a prude. I also deal with battered children.

Dr. Dustilee