All Comments on 'Enforcing The Pre-Nup'

Yes eve didn't tell him about the abuse and drug involved and blackmail of her father to him, he felt betrayed and heartbroken any man would. But after he learned the story, he still didn't visit her knowing she was slowly dying PREGNANT with his child. If she died or something happen to the baby it would clearly be on his head. He didn't want to see her okay but he should regardless go for the sake of his baby, the mc didn't even care about that. If it wasn't because of eve mother begging (a woman who was used and abused) on her knees for him to go he probably never would, how pathetic is that. Apart from that, overall good read

Great story KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK (JAYBEE186)

5 Stars on a good story . I wish we had a third party to run against the 2 parties we have now . I mean we have people in their 80's and 90's in the house . Talk about life time politicians . They should have no more then 3 times in office . Twice as president at most

Great story, my only negative comment is the lead in to the story. When did it happen? When you get to the point that he sees the video of the wife "cheating" he then is in the hospital and then secluded until the father in law is arrested. So it doesn't seem to fit what happened at that point in the story.

Wow, lots of comments. Good story with a few plot holes. Most have been pointed out by other readers. Four stars. Thanks for writing.

Its a good one. I did felt it was a bit over the top with all the people and institutions involved. I have almost zero faith in politicians and that is still probably too much. I think keeping them institutionalized and sedated was a bit extra. But that didn't stopped me from enjoying the story. Im glad he came back to his senses about Eve after it was clear she was abused and drugged. The opening part of the story, just didnt seem to make it into the plot. Still 5 stars bc i had a good time reading it. Thanks!

Like others, I'm confused about the chronological order of events here based on the introduction of the story. Other than that, with a few minor quibbles, it was an excellent story. I had this feeling of dread about Eve the entire time because, well, this is a "Loving Wives" story, but Eve turned out to be an actual loving wife (and mother). I was actually getting really angry at Tommy when he was being an idiot and refusing to understand that his wife was being sexually abused by her own father and raped by his supporters.

Wonderful story! Thank you for writing and sharing it here.

Reread. Fine story very well told. Thank you, you have provided countless hours of entertainment.

This is my second read of this story. It was excellent. Thank you. 5 stars.

Second read for me too, and I like it even more than the first time. You describe very skillfully the life of a man with genuine integrity.

Can someone please explain the opening to me?

When did this happen in the main story?

Too much hurt done by the xxxxx Stan, and too few pain for him... I would have preferedf BTStan A LOT MORE...

It killed me Sir. I had it in my mind ,she was gonna mess it up . I hate politics want nothing to do with it. I've removed TV, radio newspaper from my life . I started reading and dam kook I enjoyed /nuagra falls. I'm happy to read a story with such a ending. I'm personalizing but but a committed relationship is what makes life . Your story showed this. I say we'll done Sir I look to look into your talent. Be well thanks for sharing . Brian wolfe usmc ret

Wow do we in the US need this one chance party

Superb story and truth and goodness prevailed for once. Well worth a 5.

I really enjoyed the first half, but then it totally went off the rails. Really felt like you were going to incredible lengths to justify him taking her back in the end, when really, she was drugged and abused was plenty. She lied, yes, but jfc, given her childhood, it'd be awful to blame her.

Then the part about how "she never actually cheated on him because she never sucked his dick" made me feel sick. Given how far you had to stretch the premise to make that point, it came across as a meta way of saying this things needs to be true or else it's all her fault.

The dude was a massive selfish asshole for all he was praised as the everyman hero. It's one of those cases where, it's not that he's that great. It's that the antagonist is so bad that he looks great by comparison.

Well Done.

I couldn’t stop reading if I had wanted to. This was intriguing and I wouldn’t be surprised to find out things like this had and are still happening. We all know that with the coverups, the fake news(damn I hate that phrase even though it fits like a proverbial glove), the rushed headlines of an overblown story that was only pushed to the forefront so it could take the focus off some seriously illegal and or dangerously stupid and most likely real situation and other such underhanded crap. The characters were spot on and worked incredibly well in their rolls throughout the story. Thanks for everything you did to make this such a fine and memorable story.

Like anonymous below me I loved it and couldn't stop until I finished it. I too loved the Lazy Lemon Sun series, as I thought the author did a great job on it too. It's a very touching series, and I can see some of the parallels to this in it. I really did enjoy this though, but I think I've read it before (a couple of years ago).

eh i felt he should have been smarter than to get involved with rich political white family. also hard to feel for him he made the wrong choice out of stupidity