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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

A good start for only 7 stories. But writing such short stories you need to develop a lot better style to get any semblance of realism, unless all you are after are "stroke stories". I recommend you get an editor. Good luck.

Bargyn1Bargyn1over 1 year ago

This story needs some editing. Keep writing.

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