by Lookingforthis
What a fucked up premise.... And an exhilarating one. I can't wait for the next chapters!
It would have been better if you left any mention of 'love' out of this. There was not one iota of love to be found. Just a young women who is mentally ill and two parents who already decided to rape her when she was young. I mean come on. ' "I...even if you die?" Shawna gaped at her daughter. "Only if you make it good," Desirée smiled at her birth mother.' She doesnt even have a problem if they kill her, it just has to be good? So yeah, "...you know that whatever we do to you, we'll always love you, right?" Her birth mother asked.' is completly superfluous. There never was and will never be love there. Too be honest, the whole insanity distracted from the erotica and I didnt see anything that resembled masochism.