All Comments on 'Enslaving Ev 02 Pt. 01'

by The_Bear_Man

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Brilliant!

You're back! Very cool! Another great chapter! Looking forward to more from you! Awesome!

ShadowRosieShadowRosieover 4 years ago
Gross ghastly people

How crude can you get? This is almost there.The writing is nasty and the plot is so far from possible it makes very little sense.

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