All Comments on 'Erik's Transformation Ch. 03'

A bit fanciful, but I enjoyed it all the same.

This story was total crap. Inviting the doctor to help her fuck her son is just ridiculous and killed the sex scene. Having the doc's commentary was absurd because mom could have done a better job of teaching her son what she likes. Also, what mother would want someone watching as she commits incest for the first time? Get real, please.

I love stories like this. If I understand Kate need the doctor's help, so the doctor present during the first fucking.

Doc needs to join

... and what's wrong with that? I loved the Doc in the picture, but, I agree, she does need to get involved. I look forward to the Doc eating out Mom, while Eric takes the Doc from behind. Then you can move on to Mom & Eric enjoying a private & developing relationship. I hope you let your imagination run wild. lol

Erik thought unloading his young balls in his mother's mouth was good, but as he discovered shooting his big doses of sperm up his mommy's cunt is even better.

This has been a fun fantasy story to read. I am looking forward to seeing what happens next.

Very erotic and kinky.

Kate is going to be a very well fucked woman for a long time with having a horny stud of a son like Erik.

Hope to see more soon.

Thanks for the read...

I'm with you dude. Absolute Crap it is. Better elsewhere.

But its fun Crap. Just don't let the unreal bother you much.

Just do what I did. Read. Laugh off & move on.

This is not crap. You do not understand the idea of this story. Go on Nik314 ...

good story want more

I like your story keep up writing well

What kind of DOCTOR would ask a mother,

to do this with her son ????. Unless he had a

chance too get some of MOMS goodies.

Hot story, good read.

...THANKS...

... but isn't he doc going to give him a tour of his hot, wet, and needy Mom's pussy. How to please her with his mouth and fingers. How to find her afore mentioned, with no explanation, "G" spot. How to make her beg for his steel hard rod. How to prepare her for his cock to penetrate her tight sphincter and fuck her beautiful big ass.

Oh well what do I know? You're the author, and I'm just the pervert reading the story.

Without the character of Dr. Wood, this story would be a diseaster. The son honestly does not know what to do sexually. Throughout this story, the mother has failed to inform her son exactly what she enjoys and how to please her. Although the mother finally sees her son has a man and she accepts the fact that she likes to please him, she stillnot explained the sexual act from a woman's point of view. She has failed to explain "trust" to her son. After all, it is the woman who is penetrated; therefore, the male must know what he is doing.