All Comments on 'Erin's Decision to play in the Club'

Great story, I would enjoy seeing this as a series with Erin being used in several creative ways.

This would be a much better story without all the exclamation marks. What you describe is erotic for sure, but not at all unusual, or unusually exciting, for a BDSM club story. The exclamation marks a just a distraction. They say that you have no judgment and no sense of what is good about your own story.