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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Well done!

Reminded me of my own time in the (different) desert.

I was one of the OICs, so I didn't get to have any fun.

Makes me want to get a surplus HMMWV ambulance.

WetheNorthWetheNorthabout 2 years ago
Very moving

well done

no complaints

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Deep, sexy. Loved it. Def checking out some of your other stories.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Your description of sex was quite interesting, at least in terms of vocabulary.

Enjoyed the story, even as a non-Army person.

Continue what you do. That is an order, Private.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Teasing for a sequel?

bhojobhojoalmost 2 years ago

A lovely story.... Short and Sweet but unfortunately like life often is it has many open ends....

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Although I’m no stranger to writing, I’ve never had the courage to share. When I came across this website, I found myself inspired to journal some of my own experiences and fantasies. As a visitor, I’ve enjoyed reading all the contributors’ stories and look forward to getting ...