All Comments on 'Erotic Escape'

Very interesting style, almost like a documentary. Not bad, just different. Makes for easy reading, which allows the mind to explore. There’s a lot packed into this little space! Excellent story!

Short, sweet and to the point. More please!

Very good. More please.

Very sexy. I loved the build up. Would love to read more descriptions about your body and how you feel while getting penatrated.

Great read for a short story, but they don't always have to be drawn out too long. Keep up the good work.

This certainly has potential but it is rather rushed; it should have run to three or four pages. As it is it has turned out rather bland. Are You sure you should be writing erotica?