All Comments on 'Erotic Happenstance Ch. 01'

by BourneAkuma

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
good

A nice, short, to the point, stroke story. Not much about either character and almost nothing about Christian or how she came decide he would not change and be there for her. Or why she did not go to where he obviously was going to be. Your 'Labiaplasty' story had much more to it in addition to the very hot sex. It was an an obvious no-brainer that this is a subject or issue that you feel strongly about. To do your best work, I suggest you pick a subject or category that means a lot to you and concentrate your turgid brain stem on that subject for inspiration. Thanks and Good Luck.

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