by Slowandeasy47
imho "a bit less third person" with more graphic description would help greatly. The plot, so to say, is already fully out with only slight (could be increased) changes in the subject lady. That could explain why only the third story crossed the 4.50 score
God you don't know what you did to me.. thank you so much. Her feelings, her lust. You could as well have described my feelings . I wish I was her. My favourite story so far,keep writing please.. Keep writing about older virgin women.. you just helped a 30 year old virgin edge a little and feel again what she misses out on.
I love the premise of a caring young man providing sensual massages to older women. I especially appreciate how you describe the women’s personalities. One woman is shy and inhibited while another woman is just the opposite. I gave the story a 5,
keep going. you have a winning formula here. each event is just the right length. Maybe a full description of the ladies choice of underwear. In my experience such choices frequently give an accurate indication of her requirements.
I loved these stories. I favorited many writers but your stories really reach me if you know what I mean.