All Comments on 'Erotic Quicksand Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
This is a very good....

....and evocatively drawn out metaphor for total submission.You've got talent-pistolpackinpete

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Nice writing

Can I ask a personal? Do lots of American men dress up in girl clothes and look for cock? Is like a sort of submissive thing, right? I find it interesing.-pissincrappinpete.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Nice name britboy!....

...but you're not fooling anyone.This is your genre-spelling sure isn't-pistolpackinpete

WFEATHERWFEATHERover 14 years ago
Very Impressive

I had never considered quicksand as a location of eroticism, but I can now definitely see the potential appeal. Both this and Chapter 1 have been mentioned in my blog as very impressive :-)

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