All Comments on 'Escalation Pt. 01'

by VonStilskin

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
What a tangle this is going to be

Charlene is going to become a real porn star. Vince is going to use her in so many ways. I can see him changing the "terms" before she signs the contract. Vince is going to use her in so many ways that I doubt Charlene can even imagine. Vince may only use her once a month but can torment her many times over the length of her term. BDSM videos, I hope. Gangbangs, sure. Sealing deals, of course. Maybe even use her to run drugs that could get her into trouble. So many ways Charlene can be used and abused. Should be a lot of chapters. Be creative in your writing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Wonderful - imaginative and fun to read

Nice succinct narrative style, erotic, suspense elements combined with creative plot. Short and good. Thanks for sharing - and, yes, I do hope for more.

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