All Comments on 'Eta Carinae Pt. 06'

by Tesseract2021

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Sons_Love over 1 year ago

Enjoyed the story, hoping for a part 7!!!!

slimv over 1 year ago

I will never complain about the writing style or the dialogue. I love it. I thought it was awesome that David gave his mom a cigarette case. She needs one. Anyway, I can't say I'm too crazy about Mom suggesting to her son that they invite Paige for a threesome. Yeah, I know. This is Literotica and readers like non-stop gritty sex with beasts and multiples and anything else with holes. But I think your story is too good for that.

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I'm a long-time writer of short stories and novellas. The erotica genre I approach with a level of reality. I usually write from the first person with attention paid to 'showing' the reader, rather than 'telling'. I use the 'stream of consciousness' method in my writing. Chap...

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