All Comments on 'Eternal Bondage Genie 02: Sabine'

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VersatileTwinkVersatileTwink11 months agoAuthor

As always, please let me know what y'all think of the story! I found forced orgasms a little harder to write than edging, tbh. Feedback and suggestions appreciated!

ukitakkeukitakke11 months ago

That was a very nice chapter to read. Excellently written. Though I will admit, the first chapter was better to read, not just because orgasm denial is my personal favourite, but also because you took more time to describe the trapped subjects' physical and emotional state. But it was still enjoyable to read.

As for suggestions, maybe one unfortunate lady falls afoul of someone who has a hardcore tentacle fetish?

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Love your stories, but would agree that more description on their emotional state would be nice. Just don't stop writing please.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Love ur stories! Great writing, it really sparks the imagination. Could you write a story about a guy who chooses himself to be in eternal orgasm denial with bondage and loves it? (Or a girl if u prefer) Love to hear your thoughts friend!

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Fantastic. Please write more.

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