Eulogy for a Cad

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AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Complex and complicated, sad but really long. Jimmy came off as he had it all worked out with his theory of 'toys' but in reality he was pretty messed up. Nurture really wrecked his life. He was good to many others, but hideous in the way he used women both single and especially married. Hurt to here he bagged a woman suffering from postnatal depression when she is at a difficult crossroads in her life and not entirely in her right mind. For her and others Jimmy was a predator. And a dichotomy. Some of his monologs on women was disturbing and more than a bit misogynistic. But then he thought lots of men were assholes as well. He was one whenever he went into the bar. He died as he lived. Why some guys are so thrilled with the conquest of sex with a married woman is beyond bad me. Liked the part where the MC ripped into B's harrridan of a mother.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Nope, way too much blah, blah blah and not nearly enough content. The author himself called it “mental diarrhea” in the forward, I think it was more a case of steaming diarrhea of the keyboard. With a side dish of an over abundance of redundancy. Jiminy fucking cricket, the diatribe about Queen Elizabeth and Jimmy’s litany about how to pick up women almost made my brain explode. And that’s only half the story. No way I could get all the way through. So, all that said, I didn’t like the story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Wonderful story, spectacularly written. I couldn't put it down.

GuyfromShadesGuyfromShadesabout 2 years ago

A good story on the workings of the human mind.. As you have stated there a people like this. Today with the workings of society there are becoming more like this. Thanks for writing.

OldNewAuthorOldNewAuthorover 2 years ago

An engaging tale about a complex and complicated, simple man.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Too much

I love a good, long story. This one lost me around the third page. Another commenter mentioned that Jimmy got up on his soapbox. He just kept going on and on and on about how to pick up women. I wondered what happened to the actual story.

NVDiceGuyNVDiceGuyover 4 years ago
Great story

First I felt in the middle there was too much but I get the need for the author to establish the dichotomy of the characters’ moral compass. Truthfully reading the ending made it worth the struggle through the middle. Kind of like life.... point-author.

I’ll also say the reading of the last will letter was incredibly real feeling for being fictional.

Again great job

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Pages

Pages three and four not necessary,and the rest not much better.

OnethirdOnethirdover 4 years ago
Moral arc

Quite a different story than most I read here. Lots of moralizing, but some endearing stories and a positive message in most ways. We aren’t angels or devils an all aspects of our lives. There’s always a few weaknesses to be found, and unless you are a total waste of flesh, some good aspects too.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Re Alonetoolong’s comment about getting Texas right

Rice University famously (or notoriously) has never had sororities or fraternities

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