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Complex and complicated, sad but really long. Jimmy came off as he had it all worked out with his theory of 'toys' but in reality he was pretty messed up. Nurture really wrecked his life. He was good to many others, but hideous in the way he used women both single and especially married. Hurt to here he bagged a woman suffering from postnatal depression when she is at a difficult crossroads in her life and not entirely in her right mind. For her and others Jimmy was a predator. And a dichotomy. Some of his monologs on women was disturbing and more than a bit misogynistic. But then he thought lots of men were assholes as well. He was one whenever he went into the bar. He died as he lived. Why some guys are so thrilled with the conquest of sex with a married woman is beyond bad me. Liked the part where the MC ripped into B's harrridan of a mother.
Nope, way too much blah, blah blah and not nearly enough content. The author himself called it “mental diarrhea” in the forward, I think it was more a case of steaming diarrhea of the keyboard. With a side dish of an over abundance of redundancy. Jiminy fucking cricket, the diatribe about Queen Elizabeth and Jimmy’s litany about how to pick up women almost made my brain explode. And that’s only half the story. No way I could get all the way through. So, all that said, I didn’t like the story.
A good story on the workings of the human mind.. As you have stated there a people like this. Today with the workings of society there are becoming more like this. Thanks for writing.