All Comments on 'Eureka! Ch. 01'

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Well done. Interesting start. Looking forward to the next episode!

Interesting start but some (all) of the concepts needed to be fleshed out. In addition, you barely made the transition from your introductory paragraphs into the body of the story.

That said, I look forward to more from you.

I like the start, could go several directions, all hail the femdom conspiracy.