All Comments on 'Eve & Lucy Ch. 04: Rehearsals'

Wow! My heart's racing. I predict that Amanda will soon find herself in a staring role in a porn movie. It might just be the film that Amanda herself made, but I suspect that Lucy has been secretly filming them. She's definitely sus; her lifestyle, the gifts she's buying Amanda, don't fit with her being a fairly senior civil servant.

All I could think about during that last bit with Lucy is Pizza by Ruth Wallis,

I really enjoyed getting to see Carrie go stir crazy every time she got jealous.

Just a quickie. Exhaling. Glad Amanda didn’t have to be the “bad guy” ending the relationship with Lucy, but I wish it hadn’t been so traumatic. But glad it’s over so whatever is going to happen can occur and she can have it in the rear view mirror.

Fingers crossed for part five. Thank you, THBGato!

By a “Little bit longer” you meant like 2 days right?

Really though these stories have been amazing and I am eagerly awaiting the next installment.

This is perhaps the best story about true consent I've read here. Lucy sure is a piece of work. Here's hoping Amanda and Carrie will finally get together now.

Great writing, I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter!

I wondered why you had two characters with the same name, but now I see it.

Lucy is the true Satan (as opposed to Lucifer Lightbearer), and I do hope she gets her thorough and permanent comeuppance in part 5 (or later).

It's ironic how you portrayed Lucy. She's represents this project against sexual abuse, but she herself in her personal life can still learn from what she stands for. You portrayed her in such a way that she's still human. You could say she's maybe a cheater (like there are some red flags pointing to this), and she's therefore not telling everything, but at the same time, so is Amanda. It must have heard hearing that you are just a rebound girl. I'm glad the relationship broke off, although a bit dramatically, I was hoping Carrie would break it off the first time she wanted to, but I guess she got distracted by a sexy look and expensive presents/dinner. Also I got the impression Lucy wasn't interested in using Amanda's video's at all, not even when they turned out really good. She just wanted to impress Amanda with her work. Being told by her that she must do more than follow the book and that she needs to put her hart into her work was fabulous, and actually a kind reminder for me also. Looking forward to the next part.

Excellent the short wait tho it seemed so long from 2 to 3. Lots of good solid substance but also a lot of good affection and loving moments.

I don’t tend to log into my lit account very often, and I’m not sure how lit works with anon likes vs account likes but In hopes that it helps you at all i wanted to rate this on here, you have quickly become one of my favorite authors and I hope you continue to make amazing content :) <3

screaming, I need a fifth part immediately. I hunger for it, I need the women to make kissy faces and perhaps more 👀 love literally all of your works btw so good