All Comments on 'Everything is Peaceful at Night'

Wow! What a debut! Beautiful piece that evokes eroticism in spades! Absolutely loved it :)

Good story, short and not quite so sweet, Whatever happens in the contest, keep writing, people will want to see more from you.

Second person is tricky to write in and I think you did a lovely job here.

You are describing my perfect Christmas gift. Beautifully written. Good luck in the comp. A small remark if i may, I think there is a small confusion in the narrative when the two males talk to her, when she describing what she likes.

holy.... beautiful.