by wifeserver
This crossed the line from bossy to abusive. Might as well write a story about a physically abusive husband who rapes and beats his wife. Tell us how he shattered her orbital socket, caused spiral breaks, broke ribs, terrorized her into submission and then lecture us on how it’s just a story and if we don’t like it….move on.
Sure, some guys can jerk off to it; but Hamas bragged about raping and torturing Israeli women so that’s not a very good litmus test, now is it.
Whackdoodle's comment is outrageously incorrect, inappropriate and outright malicious. There's not a word of violence, physical harm, force or coercion in Ex-Wife's Revenge. Whackdoodle's reference to physical abuse, rape, wife-beating, broken bones and torture constitute malicious slander.
My story contains nothing of the sort and neither alludes to nor condones or even suggests anything like that.