All Comments on 'Executive Submission Ch. 02'

by MistressVal

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lordchilworthlordchilworthover 15 years ago
thanks

Thanks. loved it. want more.

DryhillDryhillalmost 13 years ago
HOT, VERY HOT

There is nothing i can say other than thank you for an incredible story.

BahamaBahamaalmost 12 years ago
Damn

Damn girl that was frickin awesome ! Please write more and them

lgcelsielgcelsieabout 9 years ago
Ms. Jones

The narrative is not clear. Introducing Ms. Jones, a client, as Lisa is a poor choice of names given an employee named Lisa got Susan in trouble in the previous chapter, Otherwise I love the chapter but rated it lower than I rated the first because of the confusion.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

So hot and wonderful. Love the added dynamic of the second sub. I love that Susan got the ring, though it would have been better if she had her clit pierced instead of just the hood.

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