by MistressVal
There is nothing i can say other than thank you for an incredible story.
The narrative is not clear. Introducing Ms. Jones, a client, as Lisa is a poor choice of names given an employee named Lisa got Susan in trouble in the previous chapter, Otherwise I love the chapter but rated it lower than I rated the first because of the confusion.
So hot and wonderful. Love the added dynamic of the second sub. I love that Susan got the ring, though it would have been better if she had her clit pierced instead of just the hood.