by MistressVal
So hot and wonderful. Love the added dynamic of the second sub. I love that Susan got the ring, though it would have been better if she had her clit pierced instead of just the hood.
The narrative is not clear. Introducing Ms. Jones, a client, as Lisa is a poor choice of names given an employee named Lisa got Susan in trouble in the previous chapter, Otherwise I love the chapter but rated it lower than I rated the first because of the confusion.
There is nothing i can say other than thank you for an incredible story.