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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
LOVE it

short but sweet! can't wait for more!

Ib_SaysIb_Saysover 5 years ago

Nice scene, though it feels pretty empty on its own, there's simply not much of a narrative, it's leading nowhere.

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I enjoy reading and writing. Honest friends, good food, wine, chocolate, and sensuous touch are some of the things which give me pleasure. I have a passion for motorcycles and touring throughout North America.