All Comments on 'Experiment 1129 - Prologue'

Keep going, you’re doing fine

You may have something here, I'd like to see where this is going..

Thank you very much for the encouragement! I have a start on the first chapter and a small amount of chapter two because as I finished writing a section I felt that part was a bit rushes and wanted to spend more time building up a back story before jumping into the thick of things. At this point, I hit a wall. I've started writing for one of the many other ideas I have rather than just stare at the words until an idea is sparked. I have 5 planned stories though I'm struggling hardcore with one and deciding if I truly wanna write it. While I do enjoy the reluctance/non-concent category... Writing straight up rape isn't my thing. So I try to stay toward reluctance at first. Though chapter two of this story toes my comfort line a tiny bit I feel it's needed to move the story. I really am enjoying writing again so maybe I'll be able to post more than just once a month but we will see what life sends my way. As of right now, my next submission will probably be part one of ”An Unhealthy Obsession”

Good opening, but what happens next?

More of a teaser than a first chapter... consider me teased.

Mooore! :)))