by Blood_less
It is a great story except for one thing, there are times when the author said "He did this" or "He did that", and the reader is left wondering who did what. Otherwise I enjoyed the story. Is there going to be a continuation to the story as in, perhaps the patron invites the spirit to join him in his home, where more hijinks ensue.
"He popped out the camera's film and squinted at the pictures through the light. "
You have obviously never used traditional film if you think you can "pop out the camera's film and squint at the pictures..."...