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Did someone make a bet with you about how many inappropriate exclamation marks you could insert into one posting? If so, you surely won the bet easily.

For the reader however the effect is most disjointing. Maybe before you post next time you could try reading it out loud, and actually exclaim each sentence that ends with an exclamation mark. My guess is it won't sound like you I intended.

Thanks for the feedback :) Admittedly i am struggling with writing properly again since most of my current communication is over text where periods and other punctuation are frowned upon hahaha. I agree with you. My story had too many explanation points and i appreciate that you took the time to send constructive feedback in a kind and humorous way. It actually made me lol at 6am because i knew i was guilty of too many explanation points! Have a great new year!!! ;)