All Comments on 'Exposed'

Let me know of any changes you would make, and if you want me to continue! Thanks!

I think the story is OK, and I would like to read more, however, there are way too many errors in your choice of words, your sentence structure and punctuation. It makes reading and comprehanding sometimes difficult. If your command of the English language isn't very good, then please have someone edit it for you.

Thank you for your input.

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