All Comments on 'Extended Family Pt. 03'

Wow, most definitely worth the wait. Cannot wait to see where you go with this story.

That is fucking awesome. I love the hot monkey fucks, but equally important to me is the well written story. You have woven together a masterful web, and can't wait to see where things go from here, and how you tie things together. One thing I'm pretty sure of though, Reagan isn't the spider she thinks she is. I could be wrong, but I think there's even bigger spiders than her in this web. Out fucking standing. 5/5 stars.

Dewey Cheatham

Bruhhh. His sister is insane.

I know that good writers are exhorted to show and not just tell. But I would have preferred more telling and less showing in the case of Reagan and Brian. Whatever are the limits Literotica has established for graphic depictions of non-consent (not to use the "r" word), this case must have bumped into them. After all the permutations of incest, Brian's abuse was creepy.

From the first episode of "Characters" to this (temporarily?) final episode of "Extended Family," Jonah has passed from his sexual boot camp to the status of a battle-hardened sexual veteran -- all in the span of a few weeks. Has there been any attractive woman Jonah has not fucked?

Once again, this installment cries out for the assistance of a learned and punctilious editor.

It was beyond me to give the benefit of the doubt once again. This time I rounded up to a 4.

I know that good writers are exhorted to show and not just tell. But I would have preferred more telling and less showing in the case of Reagan and Brian. Whatever are the limits Literotica has established for graphic depictions of non-consent, this case must have bumped into them. After all the permutations of incest, Brian's abuse was creepy.

From the first episode of "Characters" to this (temporarily?) final episode of "Extended Family," Jonah has passed from his sexual boot camp to the status of a battle-hardened sexual veteran -- all in the span of a few weeks. Has there been any attractive woman Jonah has not fucked?

Once again, this installment cries out for the assistance of a learned and punctilious editor.

It was beyond me to give the benefit of the doubt once again. This time I rounded up to a 4.

Did Reagan tell Jonah about her giving her dad a blowjob to keep him from getting suspicious?

What a mess. Looking forward to the next story. The last 2 were great. Thanks.

Amazing writing and intrigue. Keep it up! Can't wait for the next plot to unfold.

Sam is Chloe's gf?

I’ve been writing a novel but I have the next chapter. I’ll proof it and put it up.

The new story is submitted. Enjoy!