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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Ho-ly shit... it's vulgar, it's obscene, it's depraved; it's absolutely perfect! If you don't want to add more than a wrap-up to this, I get it, but the base concepts? You've got to keep writing.

greg50greg50over 2 years ago

I'm not sure where this story can go short of Jerry/Jenny taking control over the family, other family members becoming involved, the company wanting their toy back, the changes are temporary or permanent due to a design flaw or malfunction, or it was somehow a dream which would be the most disappointing ending of the five ideas.

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