by AnimeThiccLover
Interesting story i hope you continue this one maybe the mother will fuck his brains out??
This was an almost word for word reposting of the original chapter, albeit with lesser pacing and less creative dialogue. I'm sure you've got some ideas of what to do differently in the future, I just don't see why you needed to essentially plagiarise someone else's work to do it
This is most certainly continuing. I recommend checking out the original if you want some more of the mother's antics. This story is generally about Justin's rise over his mother, rather than him being constantly lesser like the original.
This is essentially a better version of the original and I know that there have been people have asked to continue other people's works and often that's great but doing so and copying the first chapter almost verbatim and without permission seems kinda shitty?
I don't like you basically lifted the first chapter from the original story, and I hope the remaining chapters are vastly different. However, I do like that you are going on a new journey with these characters, as I was also extremely disappointed with the original story's ending. I'm cautiously optimistic for more of what's to come, and will definitely read it.
You definitely don’t have to take this down, since I was the one who gave you permission after all. (I just didn’t feel like signing in at the time 😅).
This was an amazing chapter and I was curious about how you were going to write it, I’m going to take this as an alternate universe/story. We should collaborate further so I can give you specs about the characters in the other chapters if you would like them.
You don't have to even think about taking this down, since I was the one who gave you permission to write it. So far it's a glorious chapter and I'm interested in seeing where you take this Alternative take/story/universe. Feel free to message me if you want or need specs about Aline and the other characters in the story.
Great start, it is very similar, but I guess thats the point, a similar start point branching out to a different story, only problem is you've got my interest now and I have no patience, I'm not pushing, but any feedback on your planned schedule would be much appreciated.
Well, this was just because I really disliked how the original ended up. Of course, if BlueBallGuzzy said anything about disliking it, I would have instantly taken it down, to respect his work, but he's said it's fine. I hope you all understand that this isn't plagiarism. I've not said this is my own original work, if anything, it's closer to Fanfiction. I'm a fan of his story, so I wanted to create my own version, obviously with all the original credit to him. Plagiarism is a slippery word to throw around, since it's so major. Please try and use the word properly.
Just ignore all the people claiming plagiarism, blueballguzzy gave explicit permission and to be honest there's very little new under the sun, hell put 5 minutes into googling and you could probably find dozens of stories in the dominant, cuckolding, futa mother theme, you gave credit and now are taking the story in a new and interesting direction and I can't wait to see what happens next, preferably sooner rather than later. Peace.
We definitely need more i would live to see where your going with this.
Haha lol, the moment I saw this, first thing I HAD to do before even reading was to post comment! Excellent work getting the story going again (haven't read it, but tiltle was simply hilarious😂, regular readers will understand).
About any issues on reusing characters we'all like, "hiatus stories are given steroids to keep up or lag behind."
In the original he evt best his mother so we all got our wish. I hope you can expand a bit on why the mother is doing what shes doing. Also one point:
When Lsa looked at him he was shocked and had a mortified expression thats fine but when he started to run away and his mom asked him where are you going he shouldve shouted at her like wtf are you doing? Why ?your my mom bla bla