All Comments on 'Fabula, sed vera Ch. 01'

Liked your first story and the second is proving to be interesting hope you continue it in the same line

Well written and intriguing start

Excellent story. Edit for grammar and spelling.

Good start, looking forward to the next installment

Love your writing and your universe.

Wonderful beginning. I already wish it would be more than two chapters. Some minor grammatical errors, but as I believe English is a second language for you, they’re not enough to worry much about. Hope you decide to extend it.

Interesting story, Look forward to the next chapter. Main editing problems are a quick fix that a last run through by you would fix.