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All Comments on 'Failed Blackmail'

by Jessmartin

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Part 2 please.

Qwer12Qwer12almost 2 years ago
Fun Start

Good start if you wanted to make it a series. Could have fun with this new turn of events. Nice twist t9 the story. Cheers

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

The story has a good idea, and the flow is okay. I would have someone proof-read for you to help with your English, but overall good work!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Está bueno. Si te ayuda, los gringos dicen "me vengo" más que el "me corro", sería el verbo "come" en vez de "run".

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Part 2?

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